I was one of the shorter kids, so I had to get all bundled up in the small school life jackets that were really uncomfortable while other people got more big and comfortable ones that the "beach people" owned. There was one man on the motor boat that controlled it and made sure the "kids" each had the same amount of time as everyone else on the sailboats. You would have been just sitting and waiting for the sailboats to return. Now getting back to the real courageous adventure.
I had jumped from the motor boat onto the sailboat as per the instructions. Now the part that really was the nightmare was that everyone had to capsize in the water at least once. My face had broken out into cold sweat as I told the "boat guy" I was ready to capsize. (I was scared about falling into the water) We shifted a few times from one side of the boat to the other so that the boat capsized. The "boat guy" told me to watch out for the boom since it would be painful if you got hit by the metal bar while it fell into the water. ( A few people actually got hit by the boom) So I was so worried about that, that I had forgotten about the sail.
When I fell in the water, my face went under for a few seconds before I was able to get out from under the sail. Let me just get one fact straight, that water TASTE TERRIBLE!! And that water STUNG MY EYES!! I floated (and paddled) to the back of the boat where the "boat guy" was waiting. So what we were supposed to do was jump on the center board till the boat turned back over. I'm telling you, that drains your energy real easily! The "boat guy" got back on the boat easily, but I was so exhausted from turning the boat back over that the "boat guy" had to literally pull me onto the boat.
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Right after getting back on the boat, I had to jump back onto the motor boat for the next person to get onto this sailboat! After ten minutes, I went on this other sailboat. In all the sailboats I went on that day, I had capsized 5 times! Just because I wanted to. At the beginning of this story, I was so frightened but by the end I loved it so much I wanted to do over and over again!!
I really liked how you explained how you felt and what was happening around you. I think you should leave spaces between each paragraph. I also think you should use a different color instead of white because I had a hard time reading your blog post. I also think that you should put the URL for the pictures at the end of your blog post. Otherwise really good.
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ReplyDeleteThis story was interesting it really told me how you felt in the story you also explained everything that was going on all around you. it think you should have had your pictures at the end of your story. Great job!
I really like all the details and the information but im agree with kennedy and sarah, you should put your pictures at the end.
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